kia ora
me and my sister baked biscuits in lockdown. they are realy realy delicous i will show you what they look like
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kia ora
me and my sister baked biscuits in lockdown. they are realy realy delicous i will show you what they look like
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Hi Brenna,
ReplyDeleteI would love to see your biscuits, but it doesn't look like a picture has come through. Why don't your describe them to me?
Mrs Hamilton
i added my photo to it yur welcome
DeleteWell done Brenna, I wonder if there's any left?
DeleteKia Ora Brenna, it is great you are baking with your sister and developing your cooking skills. To insert a picture into a blog post click on the icon that is a square with a mountain and upload the picture from your computer. If you need help with this I can show you in the class meet tomorrow.
ReplyDeletei dont need help noww
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